Henry
Chinaski, c'est Bukowski lui-même, un écrivain
alcoolique et grand amateur de femmes.

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Alone With Everybody
by Charles Bukowski
The flesh covers the bone
and they put a mind
in there and
sometimes a soul,
and the women break
vases against the walls
and the men drink too
much
and nobody finds the
one
but keep
looking
crawling in and out
of beds.
flesh covers
the bone and the
flesh searches
for more than
flesh.
theres
no chance
at all:
we are all trapped
by a singular
fate.
nobody
ever finds
the one.
the
city dumps fill
the junkyards fill
the madhouses fill
the hospitals fill
the graveyards fill
nothing
else
fills.
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"Maybe I should have slammed her? How did a man know
what to do? Generally, I decided, it was better to wait,
if you had any feeling for the individual. If you hated
her right off, it was better to fuck her right off; if
you didn't, it was better to wait, then fuck her and hate
her later on." from WOMEN (pg. 189)
Yeah, I know that's terrible. But, man, it's also funny
and brutally honest, and in a way it underscores the best
thing about Bukowski's 3rd (and arguably second best)
novel, WOMEN, the book where Bukowski bluntly set out
to prove he was a male chauvinist pigor possibly
the most truthful author around.

I just happily finished re-reading it (for maybe the 4th
or 5th timeover I don't know how many years), and
I still can't decide if it's a romantic comedy (he does
end up with the "chaste" girl by the end); or
a coming-of-age story (he does learn about sex, as if
for the first time; with the character of Lydia teaching
him all about the working parts of a vagina and how to
eat pussy); or if it's a sexploitation romp. (The sexual
scenes occur every 5 or 10 pages and are depicted very
deliberately, highlighting the graphic elements in a way
that would make Chuck Palahniuk blush.)
Here's one
of my favorites:
"The
night wore on. Then I looked around and Valerie and Bobby
were gone. I walked into the bedroom and there was Valerie
on the bed, naked except for her spiked high heels. Her
body was firm and lean.
Bobby was still dressed and was sucking
Valerie's breasts, going from one to the other. Her nipples
stood tall.
Bobby looked up at me. "Hey, old
man, I've heard you brag about how you eat pussy. How's
this?"
Bobby ducked down and spread Valerie's
legs. Her cunt hairs were long and twisted and tangled.
Bobby went down there and licked the clit. He was pretty
good but he lacked spirit.
"Wait a minute, Bobby, you're not
doing it right. Let me show you."
I got down there. I began far back and
worked toward it. Then I got there. Valerie responded.
Too much so. She wrapped her legs around my head and I
couldn't breathe. My ears were pressed flat. I pulled
my head out of there.
"O.K., Bobby, you see?"
Bobby didn't answer.
from WOMEN (pg. 255)
It's true that Bukowski exaggerated the details of his
life. And as he says when another character asks him,
"What's fiction?" He answers (pg. 197): "Fiction
is an improvement on life."
And having
read his biography by Howard Sounes (LOCKED IN THE ARMS
OF A CRAZY LIFE), it's apparent that he not only exaggerates
the amount of sex, but also the amount he was paid for
poetry readings (his real-life minimum was $25.00 ...
whereas in the book he's frequently offered 15 or 20 times
that amount).
Stylistically,
this time around, I could see a lot of John Fante (which
Bukowski always admitted to, as in one of portion of the
book where he spells out his name and favorite works ["F-A-N-T-E.
Ask the Dust. Wait Until Spring, Bandini"pg.
200])and also A LOT of Ernest Hemingway, especially
the Ernest Hemingway of THE SUN ALSO RISES (the Paris
Hemingway) and A MOVEABLE FEAST.
One thing I also noticed this time around is that Bukowski
has a special knack for closing a chapter or section in
the simplest way possible; this is actually harder than
it seems, and it's something that drives me crazy when
I'm writing. I mean, when you're designing a scene, you're
also trying to anticipate a way to make it as brief as
possible, to conclude it. You want to get the scene done
and tie it up with seeming effortlessness. Bukowski is
excellent at this, concluding chapters precisely and even
with a poem-like rhythm:
"Katherine
walked into the boarding tunnel and was gone.
I walked back to the parking lot, got
in the Volks, thinking, I've still got this. What the
hell, I haven't lost everything.
It started."
from WOMEN (pg. 107)
Here's another
example:
"I
phoned Cecelia back that night, and I phoned her again
the next night, and once more after that, and then I stopped
phoning."
from WOMEN (pg. 172)
Another example.
"Goodnight,
Cecelia," I said.
I pulled her to me. She was naked. Jesus,
I thought. We kissed. She kissed very well. It was a long,
hot one. We finished.
"Cecelia?"
"Yes?"
"I'll fuck you some other time."
I rolled over and went to sleep.
from WOMEN (pg. 175) {... yeah, I know that's cold,
but it's also cruel-funny.}
Some might argue that, structurally, WOMEN is weaker than
POST OFFICE or HAM ON RYE, and I would agree to some extent
with that. Structurally, the book isn't an "integrated"
whole, but episodicwith events stacking up like
layers in a cake.
In other
words, the female characters in this novel enter and leave,
enter and leave, enter and leave, as Bukowski "works
and works and works," and rarely seems able to "make
it" or come, inevitably blaming his alcohol intake.
And, of course, the women in this novel are mighty demanding,
which adds to the comedy, the slapstick humor of the book,
as in this scene with Lydia:
"What
the hell good are you then?"
"Well, I can fry eggs and do magic
tricks."
"Don't be funny. I'm asking you,
what the hell good are you?"
"The leg will heal. If it doesn't
they'll cut it off. Be patient."
"If you hadn't been drunk you wouldn't
have fallen and cut your leg. It's always the bottle!"
"It's not always the bottle, Lydia.
We fuck about 4 times a week. For my age that's pretty
good."
"Sometimes I think you don't even
enjoy it."
"Lydia, sex isn't everything! You
are obsessed. For Christ's sake, give it a rest."
"A rest until your leg heals? How
am I going to make it meanwhile?"
"I'll play Scrabble with you."
Lydia screamed. The car began to swerve
all over the street. "YOU SON-OF-A-BITCH! I'LL KILL
YOU!"
She crossed the double yellow line at
high speed, directly into oncoming traffic. Horns sounded
and cars scattered. We drove on against the flow of traffic,
cars approaching us peeling off to the left and right.
Then just as abruptly Lydia swerved back across the double
line into the lane we had vacated."
from WOMEN (pg. 91)
>>> (Lydia totally
reminds me of an Eric Stanton femme.) <<<

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Some Favorite Book Quotes from WOMEN:
"That night she drank half a bottle of red wine,
good red wine, and she was sad and quiet. I knew she was
connecting me with racetrack people and the boxing crowd,
and it was true, I was with them, I was one of them. Katherine
knew that there was something about me that was not wholesome
in the sense of wholesome is as wholesome does. I was
drawn to all the wrong things: I liked to drink, I was
lazy, I didn't have a god, politics, ideas, ideals. I
was settled into nothingness; a kind of non-being, and
I accepted it. It didn't make for an interesting person.
I didn't want to be interesting, it was too hard. What
I wanted was only a soft, hazy space to live in, and to
be left alone. On the other hand, when I got drunk I screamed,
went crazy, got all out of hand. One kind of behavior
didn't fit the other. I didn't care."
from WOMEN (pg. 104)
"It
was, finally, for everyone, a matter of waiting. You waited
and you waited -- for the hospital, the doctor, the plumber,
the madhouse, the jail, papa death himself. First the
signal was red, then the signal was green. The citizens
of the world ate food and watched t.v. and worried about
their job or their lack of same, while they waited."
from WOMEN (pg. 213)
{See the poetry there? It's hidden in prose form but I'll
break it down to create a whole new Bukowski poem ...
to be included in a future collection of verse maybe.
Haha.}
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It
was, finally,
for everyone,
a matter of waiting.
You
waited and you waited
for
the hospital,
the doctor,
the plumber,
the madhouse,
the jail,
papa death himself.
First
the signal was red,
then the signal was green.
The
citizens of the world
ate food and watched t.v.
and worried about their job
or their lack of same,
while
they waited.
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Now the fictional women and their real life counterparts:

Lydia Vance = Linda King ... Oh man, she's my favorite
crazy mama character. She makes for the best scenes in
the book because she's the best matched against Chinaski
(Bukowski).

Tammie = Pamela Miller,
aka "Cupcakes" (a reference to her big
ole' D-cup boobs) A cruel, loony character in the book,
my second favorite ... She also appears in BORN INTO THIS,
the documentary film on Bukowski.

Arlene = Georgia Peckham-Krellnergal
pal of Tammie (or Cupcakes)

Bobby and Valerie = Brad
and Tina Darby (of the pussy-eating scene quoted abovepg.
255)

Sara = Linda Lee Bukowski
... the "good" girl Bukowski ended up with.

Dee Dee = Liza Williams
(a sad character in the book ... she deserved better.
She's also in BORN INTO THIS ... talking about Bukowski's
"purple onion")

Tanya = Amber O'Neal ... the last woman in the book. (check
out the "extras" on BORN INTO THIS, for her
side of what happened between them.)

Cecelia = Ruth Wantling (with William Wantling, "William
Keesing" in the novel)
"Cecelia sat and watched us drink. I could see that
I repulsed her. I ate meat. I had no god. I liked to fuck.
Nature didn't interest me. I never voted. I liked wars.
Outer space bored me. Baseball bored me. History bored
me. Zoos bored me."
from WOMEN (pg. 182)
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The 1970s, I think, was
definitely Bukowski's best decadecreatively. All
his novels + poetry books from this time are worth reading
and re-reading.
- POST OFFICE
(1971) ... novel.
- MOCKINGBIRD
WITH ME LUCK (1972) ... poems.
- SOUTH OF NO
NORTH (1973) ... short stories.
- BURNING IN
WATER, DROWNING IN FLAME (1974) ... poems.
- FACTOTUM (1975)
... novel.
- LOVE IS A
DOG FROM HELL (1975) ... poems.
- WOMEN (1978)
... novel.
- PLAY THE PIANO
DRUNK (1979) ... poemsa great book at
that.
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